A Song of the Guns — Key Ideas to Explore
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GILBERT FRANKAU, R.S.A.
BOSTON AND NEW YORK HOUGHTON MIFFLIN COMPANY The Riverside Press Cambridge 1916
COPYRIGHT, 1916, BY GILBERT FRANKAU ALL RIGHTS RESERVED _Published April 1916_
_A Song of the Guns_ was written under what are probably the most remarkable conditions in which a poem has ever been composed. The author, who is now serving in Flanders, was present at the battle of Loos, and during a lull in the fighting--when the gunners, who had been sleepless for five nights, were resting like tired dogs under their guns--he jotted down the main theme of the poem. After the battle the artillery brigade to which he was attached was ordered to Ypres, and it was during the long trench warfare in this district, within sight of the ruined tower of Ypres Cathedral, that the poem was finally completed. The last three stanzas were written at midnight in Brigade Headquarters with the German shells screaming over into the ruined town.
The Voice of the Slaves Headquarters Gun-Teams Eyes in the Air Signals The Observers Ammunition Column The Voice of the Guns
These are our masters, the slim Grim muzzles that irk in the pit; That chafe for the rushing of wheels, For the teams plunging madly to bit As the gunners wing down to unkey, For the trails sweeping half-circle-right, For the six breech-blocks clashing as one To a target viewed clear on the sight-- Gray masses the shells search and tear Into fragments that bunch as they run-- For the hour of the red battle-harvest, The dream of the slaves of the gun!
We have bartered our souls to the guns; Every fibre of body and brain Have we trained to them, chained to them. Serfs? Aye! but proud of the weight of our chain, Of our backs that are bowed to their workings, To hide them and guard and disguise, Of our ears that are deafened with service, Of hands that are scarred, and of eyes Grown hawklike with marking their prey, Of wings that are slashed as with swords When we hover, the turn of a blade From the death that is sweet to our lords.
THE VOICE OF THE SLAVES
_By the ears and the eyes and the brain,_ _By the limbs and the hands and the wings,_ _We are slaves to our masters the guns;_ _But their slaves are the masters of kings!_
A league and a league from the trenches, from the traversed maze of the lines,-- Where daylong the sniper watches and daylong the bullet whines, And the cratered earth is in travail with mines and with countermines,--
Here, where haply some woman dreamed, (are those her roses that bloom In the garden beyond the windows of my littered working-room?) We have decked the map for our masters as a bride is decked for the groom.
Here, on each numbered lettered square,--cross-road and mound and wire, Loophole, redoubt, and emplacement, are the targets their mouths desire,-- Gay with purples and browns and blues, have we traced them their arcs of fire.
And ever the type-keys clatter; and ever our keen wires bring Word from the watchers a-crouch below, word from the watchers a-wing; And ever we hear the distant growl of our hid guns thundering;
Hear it hardly, and turn again to our maps, where the trench-lines crawl, Red on the gray and each with a sign for the ranging shrapnel’s fall-- Snakes that our masters shall scotch at dawn, as is written here on the wall.
For the weeks of our waiting draw to a close.... There is scarcely a leaf astir In the garden beyond my windows where the twilight shadows blur The blaze of some woman’s roses.... "Bombardment orders, sir."
Their rugs are sodden, their heads are down, their tails are turned to the storm. (Would you know them, you that groomed them in the sleek fat days of peace,-- When the tiles rang to their pawings in the lighted stalls and warm,-- Now the foul clay cakes on breeching-strap and clogs the quick-release?)
The blown rain stings, there is never a star, the tracks are rivers of slime. (You must harness up by guesswork with a failing torch for light, Instep-deep in unmade standings, for it’s active-service time, And our resting weeks are over, and we move the guns to-night.)
The iron tires slither, the traces sag; their blind hooves stumble and slide; They are war-worn, they are weary, soaked with sweat and sopped with rain. (You must hold them, you must help them, swing your lead and centre wide Where the greasy granite pave peters out to squelching drain.)
Gilbert Frankau's A Song of the Guns opens with a striking personification: the guns are 'our masters, the slim grim muzzles that irk in the pit.' The poem immediately establishes a relationship of servitude—gunners have 'bartered our souls to the guns'—yet the tone is not one of lament but of fierce pride. The speaker declares, 'We are slaves to our masters the guns; but their slaves are the masters of kings,' a paradox that frames the entire work. Written under fire at Loos and Ypres, the poem bears the marks of its composition: it is a soldier's testimony, not a distant observer's account.
The Paradox of Enslavement and Mastery
The central tension in the excerpts is the gunners' simultaneous degradation and exaltation. They describe themselves as 'serfs' with 'backs that are bowed' and 'ears that are deafened,' yet they are 'proud of the weight of our chain.' This is not a simple complaint; the physical sacrifices—'hands that are scarred,' 'eyes grown hawklike'—are worn as badges of honor. The guns are 'masters' that demand everything, but the gunners' obedience grants them a kind of sovereignty: 'their slaves are the masters of kings.' The poem thus inverts conventional hierarchies, suggesting that those closest to the machinery of war hold a terrible, intimate power.
The Landscape of War: Maps, Roses, and Ruins
Frankau juxtaposes the domestic and the destructive. At Headquarters, the working room overlooks a garden where 'haply some woman dreamed' and roses bloom. Yet this same room is where 'we have decked the map for our masters as a bride is decked for the groom'—a simile that conflates marriage with targeting. The map is 'gay with purples and browns and blues,' colors that mask the lethal purpose of 'cross-road and mound and wire.' The distant 'growl of our hid guns thundering' is barely heard as the staff turns back to 'maps, where the trench-lines crawl, red on the gray.' The contrast between the serene setting and the grim work underscores the disconnect between the front and the command.
The Senses of War: Sight, Sound, and Silence
The poem is rich with sensory detail that conveys the gunners' altered perception. Their eyes are 'hawklike with marking their prey,' and they speak of 'wings that are slashed as with swords'—a reference to aircraft or perhaps the gunners' own heightened vigilance. Sound is equally important: the 'type-keys clatter,' wires 'bring word,' and the guns produce a 'distant growl.' Yet there is also silence: the gunners rest 'like tired dogs under their guns' during a lull. The note reveals that the poem's main theme was jotted down in such a pause, and the final stanzas were written 'with the German shells screaming over into the ruined town.' The interplay of noise and quiet mirrors the rhythm of battle itself.
Readers should approach A Song of the Guns as a document of its moment—a poem that does not look back from a safe distance but speaks from inside the experience. Frankau's verse is metrically regular and often rhymed, but its content is raw and immediate. Pay attention to the way he uses the language of machinery and servitude to express both horror and pride. The poem offers no easy moral; instead, it records the strange loyalty of soldiers to the tools of their trade.
There’s a particular ache in Frankau’s guns—the way the machinery outlasts the men who serve it. I often think of that when winter comes around, remembering quieter lines from The Baron's Yule Feast: A Christmas Rhyme — Background and Themes, where the warmth of a hall feels almost like a fragile defiance against the cold outside. Some books just hold that contrast close, don’t they?
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Mario Natalie Estrada - 4 weeks ago
While the intent is noble, the execution falls flat. The poems are overly sentimental and rely on heavy-handed metaphors that feel forced. The rhythm is often erratic, making them hard to read aloud. The author's attempt at capturing the war experience lacks nuance, resulting in a shallow treatment of a profound subject. -
Daniel Castillo - 3 weeks ago
This anthology of war poems is impactful, with several standout pieces that convey the horror and bravery of battle. However, the collection is somewhat repetitive in theme, and some poems feel less polished than others. Still, the strong emotional core and historical significance make it a worthy read for poetry enthusiasts. -
John Castro - 3 weeks ago
A powerful and moving collection of war poetry that captures the raw emotion and reality of conflict. The author's vivid imagery and rhythmic verses bring the guns and the soldiers' experiences to life. Each poem resonates with authenticity and deep feeling, making it an essential read for anyone interested in war literature or powerful poetry.
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